Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The table shows the details of expenditure
of
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in
5
countries namely
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countries, namely
Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey on three varieties of consumer items, in 2002. Overall, all these countries spent more money on food, drinks and tobacco. Whereas, they least spent on leisure and education.
Firstly
, people in Ireland and Turkey, consumed more than one-fourth of their earnings
in
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on
food, drinks and Tobacco at 28.91per cent and 32.14 per cent respectively. While, the other three countries drained less than 20 per cent
for
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of
these items.
Secondly
, Italians emptied the maximum on clothing and footwear at 9%, whereas, the expense
for
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of
these items in Ireland, Spain, Sweden and Turkey were almost the same, between 5.50% to 6.60%.
Lastly
, the expenditure on leisure and education were least in Spain 1.99%, followed by Ireland at 2.21 %.
On the other hand
, in Turkey it almost doubled when compared to Ireland with 4.35% of spending on studies and entertainment. The Italian and the Swedish people were
also
not far behind at 3.20%
at
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in
3.30
% respectively
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%, respectively
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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