Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

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letter to request you the availability of a hotel
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for me to stay, while I am in San Francisco. As I am being sent by my company on a short notice to San Francisco for meeting a client, I couldn't book the tickets for my stay here. I would be flying in from New York,
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I prefer a hotel
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in and around Lacoste, or anywhere near the airport, so that I could keep my city commute to a minimum. I am looking for a studio
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The single cot room
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, I am flying in b
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, I would be able to check out on 22nd June at 12:00 PM. Looking forward to hear from you. Your Sincerely Ben
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • habitat destruction
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • overexploitation
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • invasive species
  • conservation
  • sustainable practices
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • ecosystems
  • species population
  • genetic diversity
  • environmental awareness
  • protected areas
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