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Many people says that the only way to gurantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the worldd of work.Discuss

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Education
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 provides the ability to
work
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 and works provides the ability to learn. Both are related to each other. Most of the part of the community believes that to get a
guranted
give surety or assume responsibility
guaranteed
job
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, people should have to complete their
study but
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study, but
 others put emphasis to quit
study
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studying
 and gain
experience
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 through
work
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.
This
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 essay will discuss both the aspects in the following paragraphs. To commence with the major benefits of
education
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 in the world of
work
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 is that
education
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 makes the learning process better. In order to get desired and
guranted
give surety or assume responsibility
guaranteed
job
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, one must have a valid or
relevant degree
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a relevant degree
 in reference to that
work
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.
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education
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 gives the keen knowledge about the area of
particular
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particular works
the particular work
a particular work
work
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. Undoubtedly practical knowledge gives the individual more
information but
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information, but
 particular
job
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 positions demands the specific
education
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for
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of
 that role.
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, a lawyer has to complete his study, learn about the laws, rules before applying the same into his practical
work
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.
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,
education
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 is much more important in professional life. On the other side,
experience
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 makes the man perfect.
as
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As
 soon as, the individual
get
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gets
 involved in
the the
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the
 practical
work
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, his learning and understanding becomes almost double than the people who are just studying. Working and earning, along with the
experience
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, will allow the people to follow their dreams and become successful.Most of the people decide in their early age about what they want to
work
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 and become in
future
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the future
.
for
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For
 that reason, focusing on the
work
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 is better decision rather than to spend time on getting
university
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a university education
education
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. Hammering
on
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in
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last
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 nail, even though
education
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 is necessary in getting a
job
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, but it is not that much important as many people, who are not educated, but still owning a settled business and are successful.
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,
experience
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 is the most that matters too with the
education
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.
Hence
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, people should get required
education
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 to get knowledge and
experience
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 in the area of
work
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 they need.

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