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Some individuals believe that a child should attend a
school
 as early as possible due to the risk to waste time,
however
, the others hold an opinion that everyone ought to start primary education at seven
age
Suggestion
ages
 since
otherwise
 it could be harmful for a pupil itself. Considering
advantages
Suggestion
the advantages
 of an earlier entrance to
school
, the 6-years-olds might read and write well in most cases, especially if they were taught intensively or went to special courses. In
such
 cases, children may find it tiresome to attend kindergarten every day because they already want novelties. Altogether with an ordinary parental desire to raise a
wunderkind
, it resembles a beneficial idea.
Nevertheless
, several studies have shown that younger that 7-years-old children are highly vulnerable for immune system diseases and their bodies are not developed completely, if taking physical abilities into account.
Moreover
, owing to still developing organism at
this
 point, children can have scoliosis or other health issues.
Likewise
, beginning
school
 at seven has its own drawback.
For instance
, a possibility of losing knowledge aspiration always exists.
Furthermore
, starting education later will soar expenditures of parents in the majority of countries since they will have to pay for kindergartens another two years on average.
On the other hand
, a child will be prepared for stress both mentally and physically.
In addition
, 7-years-olds are able to fully concentrate for longer time, compared with younger ones. Having pupils of similar age will possibly improve relationships between them and, as a consequence, more friendly and comfortable environment for study will be achieved.
Therefore
, children will attend classes more willingly. Thereby, despite being skilled enough to go to
school
, I am convinced that children should enter primary level only at age of seven due to reduction of dangerous effects, connected especially with health, and higher preparedness of children in mental and physical ways.
Submitted by miral_ayed on

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