You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: 1) Explain your situation 2) Describe your problems 3) Tell him/her when you think you can start. Write at least 150 words

Many people believe that having a balanced
diet
will make them healthy. In a
fast growing
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society finding time to have a balanced
diet
has become a challenge. Being healthy is one of the most important factors in
life
.
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essay tries to explain the reasons why a balanced
diet
is
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to one’s
life
and to understand other factors affecting a healthy
life
. I partially agree with the fact that a balanced meal is important to have a healthy
life
. It provides a person
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right nutritious ingredients to become more fit and healthy. It will
also
give positive energy to them all day. Having a balanced
diet
will keep people
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the proper body shape and keep them out from many diseases
such
as gastritis, heart diseases, and so on.
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a balanced
diet
only will not make a person’s
life
healthy. There are other factors like exercising plays a major role in having a healthy
life
. If someone
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daily exercises, that will be very effective. Because exercises can burn
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of unwanted calories in one’s body and make them feel more comfortable and fit. And
this
gives a fresh feeling all day. In conclusion, it is very important to have a balanced
diet
and be proactive. But people have to keep in mind that they need to have a healthy excises schedule too to keep them more on track to have a healthy
life
. It is always good to follow
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before fall in sick and have to take thousands of medicine to cure the illnesses.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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