Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

In present time, technology is

geting

the act of acquiring something

getting

more and more advance.

Education system

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The education system

is

also

updating

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updated

with

feniminas

gizmos, same the other side

book

reading is

an

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a

boaring

so lacking in interest as to cause mental weariness

boring

bearing

boating

activity for children. In present time

television

is

also

a way of learning;

however

, other people think that

television

cannot take a place of

book

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books

the book

for learning, and

that is

a reason why

childern

a young person of either sex

children

have less - educated nowadays. I believe that the

book

is

more essential way

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a more essential way

of learning rather

then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

television

, so I partially agree

this

statement; and reasons of my inclination are elaborated in trailed paragraphs. To

embarkwith

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embark with

, by reading a

book

children can develop their reading skill, with the same reading can enhance their knowledge which help them to make good communication and

upbring

formal attendance (in court or at a hearing) of a party in an action

appearing

good thought in

mind

.

Book

help children to sharpen their memory power and

consentration

the strength of a solution; number of molecules of a substance in a given volume

concentration

also

.

Book

reading can not only increase

fluancy

powerful and effective language

fluency

on

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in

of

language but

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the language, but

the language but

also

increase their vocabulary which help them throughout their life. By reading a good

books

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book

they can motivate themselves but they can be a good motivator for others, and

develope

make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation

develop

ability

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the ability

abilities

of

leader

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a leader

the leader

leaders

. In the other positive view, by reading a historical

book children can

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book, children can

get

knoledge

the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning

knowledge

about the history and know

value

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the value

of the culture and tradition. By reading a comic

book

childern

a young person of either sex

children

can get good

creation

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creative

ideas and

also

this

book

may be

freshnup

their

mind

. By reading devotional

book

children get good

pease

the state prevailing during the absence of war

peace

of

mind

, and they know

aobut

(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct

about

the

reiligions

a strong belief in a supernatural power or powers that control human destiny

religion

.

However

,

television

is

also

a medium which can be a useful for

learning but

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learning, but

it should have certain limitation. There are many educational shows are broadcasting on

television

. Many channels

are make

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make

are made

children about

on going senario

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the ongoing scenario

ongoing senario

ongoing scenario

on going scenario

of

world

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the world

and

also

give information about different

cuntries

a politically organized body of people under a single government

countries

and their details and wildlife overview. But it

can not

can not

cannot

be

neglect

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neglected

that

over

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after

watching of

television

is

also

harmful to

eyes

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the eyes

of children. Sometime crime show and action

scanes

the place where some action occurs

scenes

distract their

mind

and create

nagative

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

negatives

effact

property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business

effects

. To cite and example, before a year a local physiology collage

make

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makes

an

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a

geneal

applying to all or most members of a category or group

general

final

debates

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debate

on some

prectical

concerned with actual use or practice

practical

analysis, the difference between a

children

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child

who watching

television

and the children who reading

book

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the book

. The result shows that the children who read more

book

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books

then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

watching

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watching television, they

television

they have good score in general knowledge and the have good communication skill,

also

they

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make reference to

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that they have

good

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better

concentration and

clam

steadiness of mind under stress

calm

nature. To conclude,

televisoin

broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects

television

and

book

both

are help

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help

children to

learn but

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learn, but

by reading a

book

children can many

benefit

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benefits

:

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:

good memory, sharp

mind

, good communication skill, good concentration; beside that

television

has some

advarce

contrary to your interests or welfare

adverse

effect

also

.