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Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

#wealth #guaranty #happiness
These days people are trying to acquire massive
wealth
 in order to satisfy their needs.
Considerable amount
Suggestion
The considerable amount
 of people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
 that being wealthy gives them
happiness
 while
their
in or at that place
there
 are still
few people
Suggestion
a few people
 who believe that
happiness
doesnt
does not
doesn't
 only lie in acquiring
wealth
.
This
eassay
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
 will argue that
happiness
 is not completely
gaurented
acknowledged as a supposition
granted
 by being wealthy as everyone has their own way in finding
happiness
. Most of the people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
 that
wealth
guarentee's
give surety or assume responsibility
guarantees
guarantee
happiness
. The reason behind it is because they
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
 being wealthy helps them to
fullfill
put in effect
fulfil
 all their needs and wants. For instants, buying a
luxuary
something that is an indulgence rather than a necessity
luxury
 car is a dream for everyone and
this
 can be possible only if
your
Suggestion
you're
 wealthy enough.
Ability
Suggestion
The ability
 to buy a
luxuary
something that is an indulgence rather than a necessity
luxury
 car gives them immense
happiness
 than buying a cycle. Being wealthy has been a battle cry for most of the people who want to
fullfill
put in effect
fulfil
 their needs and wants. While some feel
wealth
 is not only the factor which guarantee's
happiness
. People find their
happiness
 in their own way. Some find
happiness
 in a car while some find in a cycle.
For example
, one of my friend Ram who has a cheap mobile is much more happier than Lashman who has an
iphone
Suggestion
iPhone
. People
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
 that
happiness
doesnt
does not
doesn't
 come from
wealth but
Accept comma addition
wealth, but
 it comes
from how
Accept comma addition
from, how
 satisfied you are from what you have. So, does
wealth
gaurantees
give surety or assume responsibility
guarantees
happiness
? While its
an
Suggestion
a
 debatable topic to give an answer. Some think
wealth
 helps to
satify
meet the requirements or expectations of
satisfy
 their needs while few prefer being happy with what they have.
This
 essay argued about two perspectives of people who
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
believed
happiness
 is guaranteed by being wealthy and
few
Suggestion
the few
 who
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
believed
 that
happiness
 is not only guaranteed by
wealth
. To sum up,
its
it is
it's
 moderately important to have
wealth but
Accept comma addition
wealth, but
its
it is
it's
 not the only factor which gives
happiness
.

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