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Some people change the type of work frequently, while others do the same type of work for long time. Discuss both the views and give your Opinion.

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A person might spend his lifetime looking for the
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 that he is truly passionate about. While some frequently switches their type of
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, others stick to a single profession for a long time. In the following paragraphs we will discuss both the views and conclude with my personal opinion.
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 with, people who
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 in the same
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 for a longer duration are usually the ones who become master of a skill. The long exposure in the same
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 of
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 often makes them a true professional.
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, my friend's father had dropped out of his school after 8th grade and started working as a mechanic. He has been in the same
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 for the past thirty years and now has car service partnerships with almost every automobile company in India. The longevity in the profession has only made him a skilled master.
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, people working in the same
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 for a long period are usually satisfied with their kind of
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 and knowledge becomes their biggest asset.
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, people usually change professions when they are not satisfied with their current one. To cite an example, Warren Buffet who is amongst the richest people on Earth started as a newspaper delivery boy and is now a successful investor after twelve profession switches. He could not settle for a job as he could not find passion, but along with the job changes he earned various kinds of experiences which led to his current success.
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, people who switch jobs frequently are always looking for the
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 which brings them satisfaction
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 brings them different kinds of experiences. In conclusion, the duration of time a person spends in a
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 of
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 has its own reasons and advantages. I personally opine that working for a short period and changing
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 type gives more exposure and better life lessons.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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