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Some people think that social skills are as important as academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #skills #qualifications
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Traditionally, academic q
ualifications are considered
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qualifications, consider
qualifications consider
important factors for people to succeed in life.
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, more and more people a
re believing
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believe
that social skills are equally as important as academic qualifications. Personally, I agree with
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 viewpoint to some extent. Academic qualifications can’t be obtained without years of hard
work
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 and continuous practice, so it reflects
one
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’s ability and experience in a specific subject. Many employers require job-seekers to possess a certain level of certification for the evaluation of their skills.
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practice and hard
work
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, no
one
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 would have been able to get
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 a high score and paid more than others. Many people are arguing that academic performance shouldn’t be the main criteria as it can lead to prejudice and wrong evaluation. But those qualifications are still an important standard when there is no other information.
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, people have become more aware of the importance of social skills. A person with a sophisticated social skills will find it efficient and comfortable to
work
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 with others and cooperation is the key to success in many difficult tasks. As spice is the variety of life,
one
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 must be able to
work
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 with others. Sound relationship with others will enhance the efficiency in the workplaces, giving people m
ore sense
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a more sense
of satisfaction out of their job.
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, If
one
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 doesn’t know how to cooperate with o
ther,
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others
 they will soon be left behind.
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, social skills help people to expand their circle of friends. With a positive attitude towards others,
one
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 would be able to deal with any kinds of challenges at
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. T
O sum up,
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 in a world where people are becoming more and more competitive,
one
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 cannot succeed just with their qualifications. Being able to
work
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 with others, to cooperate has become a
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an
essential part of our l
ives
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life
and social skills shouldn’t be ignored.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social skills
  • academic qualifications
  • interpersonal communication
  • teamwork
  • emotional intelligence
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving
  • leadership
  • career advancement
  • job interviews
  • networking
  • soft skills
  • self-awareness
  • adaptability
  • collaboration
  • creativity
  • analytical skills
  • educational system
  • real-world situations
  • economic success
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