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Many students take part-time jobs while studding in university. Do you think it is a good idea or bad idea?

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Education plays a vital role in every individual’s life, regardless of his or her
age
, nationality and gender. While, A number of persons argue that kids who are not above the
age
 of 10 they should study common subjects, but other people think that they should have freedom to choose subjects according to their
interest
. I agree with the former statement, and explain it with examples. To commence with, there are various reasons that the student’s should focus on learning as many subjects.
Firstly
, under
age
 10 kids are very immature and they do not have a capacity to understand what is right or wrong topic for them.
Therefore
, They are not able to make decisions, which will affect their future life.
Secondly
, different subjects can make the base of kids
such
 as; mathematic are necessary for general arithmetic. If children have a basic understanding of every subject,
then
 they can decide about their university study according to their field of
interest
.
Otherwise
, they are not enough mature to decide for their development.
However
, it is certainly true that some people say that children should have the freedom to choose subject according to
interest
, but there are very few reasons, which support
this
 statement,
firstly
, under
age
 10 kids most probably choose the subject related to games and they can gain depth of knowledge in it, like, the physical science.
Therefore
, their
interest
 will be more towards games and they will not be accompanied by bad habits as well as keep away from drugs.
Secondly
, parents are very busy so children can spend their leisure time in games, than on social media. In overview, in future their
interest
 will be just in sports and they can not find a job any other field and it will create unemployment. To conclude, while there are few benefits if kids choose subjects according to
interest
, yet I think if kids study all kinds of subjects it could be fruitful in future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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