Writing a letter to manager for computer system problem

Dear Sir, I am having a network issue for a long,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
can't able to upload my files on cloud because of
this
issue.
Moreover
, for each and every upload
,
Accept space
,
it's taking more duration due to poor internet connection many times it's getting filed and I am not able to complete my work on time. Particularly when I am sending large file taking too much time to send.
Therefore
, if management
provide
Suggestion
provides
saperate
act as a barrier between; stand between
separate
support
LAN
connection it
Accept comma addition
connection, it
will better for me to complete my task.
Atleast
required some wifi access which is better than shared network, Regards, Sugumatr S
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