The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph gives information about Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014. It shows how many library
books
people read over
this
four-year period. As can be seen from the graph, there were different trends for
men
and women. The number of
books
read by
men
increased steadily between 2011 and 2012, from about 3000 to 4000. After that, the number rose dramatically to 14000
books
in 2014.
This
was the highest figure in the period. Women started off reading more
books
than
men
, but their numbers followed a different pattern. Between 2011 and 2012, there was an increase of 3000 from 5000
books
to 8000
books
, and
then
a gradual rise to 10000
books
in 2013.
However
, in 2014, their numbers fell back to 8000 again.
Overall
, there was a strong upward trend in the number of
books
read by
men
.
Although
women read more
books
than
men
in 2011, their reading fell to below the level of
men
in 2014.
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