Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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has always been a magical key that could eliminate completely culture
barriers between people from different countries. Hence
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having different nationalites
, different ages or even different genders. Lyricists and musicians are likely to depict the people having common origins or traditions and often comprising a nation
nationalities
culture
and human lifestyles in their creations Also
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music
melodies primarily beause
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because
music
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is also
considered as a invisual
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leveling
our lifetime and escaping from hectic pace life.
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In addition
to this
, music
could open a new world for those who love and work related to this
field. Some people would say that music
is a mystical door which let people join another
places without stress and tiring activities. What is more, not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
music
creates a plenty of oppotunities
for people to live on their own ways, reveal their personalities and introduce our unique a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
culture
to people from different countries. This
could be handle
for people to easily exchange our Suggestion
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culture
, civilizations, languages, connect people an create good relationships. I heartily love this
connecting way
through music
, music
is not only connect
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is not only connecting
is not only connected
also
our gorgeous soul.
To summarise, music
is such
a specifc
(sometimes followed by 'to') applying to or characterized by or distinguishing something particular or special or unique
specific
way
to get people closer. Specially, music
has a particular energy that could boost people
moods and make happiness. People have similar taste in Suggestion
person's
peoples
peoples'
music
could have the same way
of talking, thinking and acting primarily because music
is recognised as a soul, these soulmates
could show our abilities and our personalities. People are advisable to spend more time on sharing with Suggestion
Soulmates
this
soulmate
in recent times when busy life is happening day by day to have a productive life and add more new friends.Suggestion
soul mate
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