1. It is that in many countries, not enough students are choosing science subjects at university. What do you think are the causes of the problem? What are the effects on society?

In
this
modern era, there are different different fields and, so may opportunities for the students. So the students, don'
t
want study in common traditional subjects. Many students think that
science
subjects are very difficult to study.
Therefore
, most students don'
t
want to choose
science
subjects.
On the other hand
, the younger generation, like to do different different things to the society. So!, they are trying to invent things and explore new things. The result of
this
, the
number
of the students who are doing
science
subjects don'
t
enough for the future. And
also
, there are so many attractive job opportunities for the other subjects. But, the
science
subjects have common job opportunities only.
Therefore
, most of students willing to do the other subjects. These are the main factors for the mentioned topic. So, to increase the
number
of students who are doing
science
subjects, we can motivate them, by doing attractive sessions about the
science
stream. The other option for
this
is we can introduce new job opportunities to the students. And
also
, we can give a rough idea about the
science
stream.
Then
, they can understand that, the
science
subjects are not so difficult. By decreasing the
number
of
science
students, we haven'
t
enough employees in the
science
sector.
Therefore
, we have to request
science
employees from the other countries. The main disadvantage of
this
, we have to pay for the other countries for
this
. So,
this
is a direct issue for our economy. By doing all these things, we can increase the
number
of students to do the
science
subjects.
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