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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In today's world, images in the form of photos, pictures, and movies are used everywhere as a means of
communication
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 to the public. I certainly agree that
such
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 images have become a powerful means of
communication
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 and it is used in many different sectors to influence, inform and entertain people.
For instance
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, the entertainment industry used images to give detailed information and immediate impact to their news coverage.
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, the advertisement sectors used appealing images for their marketing and they let people know about
particular product
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a particular product
particular products
the particular product
. In Mobile phones, people are using images for their regular
communication
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 and it's quite easy and understandable.
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, while it is evident that images have become
powerful way
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a powerful way
 of communicating with people and it is not
too
in the direction of
to
 say that, it's more powerful than written or spoken word.
headlines
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Headlines
, captions, written statements or spoken commentaries
are always almost accompany
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are always almost accompanied
 with the pictures whether it's used in advertising or media. Images alone used can be notoriously misleading and less effective
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. To recapitulate, I only partly agree with the given statement. While it is true that, images can send very powerful messages, it is really effective as a means of
communication
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 when it is used along with either the spoken or written statement.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Visual communication
  • Emotional impact
  • Transcend language barriers
  • Universality
  • Infographic
  • Memory retention
  • Misinterpretation
  • Manipulation
  • Complementary
  • Evocative
  • Multimedia
  • Contextual understanding
  • Ambiguity
  • Visual literacy
  • Instant communication
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