The local government is planning to change the bus timetable. You are not happy about the proposed changes. You have decided to write about it to the editor of a local newspaper. Write a letter to the newspaper. In the letter describe the changes explain how that will affect you say how you would like the service to be improved

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Jatin, I am Sumant from Bangalore, I do visit your office to get ideas about latest happenings in the city, apart from only reading the newspaper. I am a regular reader of your local daily named Bangalore Times.

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letter is about informing about my grudge regarding the modification in the timetable of the local transport system

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bus

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. As you know the change is about

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the one-hour

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delay in all the

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timings

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which were published

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year, which is quite daunting because I might end up reaching

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very late. I think many employees and students will get affected, not just me. After a lot of thought process, I have come up with a few suggestions for you about how the service can be improved without changing the

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timings

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, promote the

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service by having coupons so that car and bike users will start using the buses so that you do not have to change the

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timings

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for having less congestion on the road.

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, please reduce the

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so that all can avail the service including homeless citizens. I am sure you will have a

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look at your decision to not change the

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of the

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transport system. I am awaiting your favourable reply. Yours Sincerely,

Sumant

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