The local government is planning to change the bus timetable. You are not happy about the proposed changes. You have decided to write about it to the editor of a local newspaper. Write a letter to the newspaper. In the letter describe the changes explain how that will affect you say how you would like the service to be improved

Hello
Mr.
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Jatin, I am Sumant from Bangalore, I do visit your office to get ideas about latest happenings in the city, apart from only reading the newspaper. I am a regular reader of your local daily named Bangalore Times.
This
letter is about informing about my grudge regarding the modification in the timetable of the local transport system
such
as
bus
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. As you know the change is about
one-hour
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the one-hour
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delay in all the
bus
timings
which were published
last
year, which is quite daunting because I might end up reaching
office
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very late. I think many employees and students will get affected, not just me. After a lot of thought process, I have come up with a few suggestions for you about how the service can be improved without changing the
bus
timings
.
Firstly
, promote the
bus
service by having coupons so that car and bike users will start using the buses so that you do not have to change the
bus
timings
for having less congestion on the road.
Secondly
, please reduce the
bus
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so that all can avail the service including homeless citizens. I am sure you will have a
second
look at your decision to not change the
timings
of the
bus
transport system. I am awaiting your favourable reply. Yours Sincerely,
Sumant
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