Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Fashion is tend to be one of the most trending aspects of life these days. During the

last

century, the styles we dress rapidly changed. In the past, no one had imagined that people will wear, the form we are dressing currently. Taking a closer look into different regions from all over the world,

for instance

, in Europe; people used to wear in a certain way,

on the other hand

, currently we can see a wide range of dressing taste. Some people argued that the trend has a negative effect on our lives. There are many reasons behind

this

claim.

Such

as, setting the bar of affording clothes very high.

Also

, spending much money to keep up with the new trending lines.

Lastly

, the bad taste of fashion, due to the flashy colours and the unusual styles. Another team has a totally different point of view, they support the idea that appearance has an added value in a positive add to our daily lives.

This

party has his own evidences,

such

as, raising the importance of using art in our manner of dressing. Adding to that, the ability of having an alternative to the out-dated customs.

Last

but not least, giving the fashion makers a better means of making a living. In conclusion, from my point of view, I support the idea that; Pattern has a great positive impact on our lives.

Firstly

, look is an important element in raising our taste of clothing.

Secondly

, It gives us a variety of options for clothes we might wear.

Lastly

, boldness of ideas that artists use in style nowadays, is a great way of expressing our inner thoughts.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

276 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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