Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by government. others believe those who financed the of a building should be free to design it as they fit. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

As time goes by, the population number increases rapidly,
therefor
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
therefore
, the number of buildings increases too.
However
, people argue whether it is the
government
or the owners of the
buildings
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building's
responsiblity
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
to decide the buildings
shape
. I believe that it is the
government
decision to choose where and how each building
sould
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
would
be stated due to different reasons. One of the difficulties that governments face in each
country
is the
design
of the cities which
incloudes
have as a part, be made up out of
includes
include
the
design
of the buildings, so it is their
responcibility
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
to decide the
shape
of the building because of many different reasons.
First
if all, in order to get beautiful
country
,
government
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the government
needs to think
carfully
taking care or paying attention
carefully
about the general
shape
of the buildings,
this
thing is very important
especialy
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
specially
from the tourism aspect. Because, when the
country
have an organized
shape
it will become as a
tourest
someone who travels for pleasure
tourist
attraction, therefor, the number
tourests
someone who travels for pleasure
tourists
theorists
will
increases
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increase
and the
country
income will
increases
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increase
.
In other words
, the
design
of the
buildin
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
building
bidding
affect
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affects
the state's income. The
second
important reason why
government
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the government
have
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has
the
pemission
approval to do something
permission
to decide the construction
design
is the properties that each
country
has.
For example
, some countries are known for the many earthquakes they have, for that reason the buildings should be
desinged
done or made or performed with purpose and intent
designed
in a way that suits their region's environment.
In addition
, it is not only because of the environment, but
also
because of the infrastructure
status which
Accept comma addition
status, which
means where should be built and how so that all the
requiernment
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requirements
requirement
can reach it,
such
as the water and electricity. In
conclousion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conclusions
consolation
,
although
some people want to
built
Suggestion
build
there
of them or themselves
their
houses as they like, it is important for the
government
to decide the
design
because it is connected with the
toursim
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
earnings and with
country
status.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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