Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
As time goes by, it becomes something common to have both parents working.
However people
argue about who should take care of their children. While some families think that it is the Accept comma addition
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resbonsibility
of the other family members, other the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
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childcare
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child care
center
. an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
This
essay will discusse
both points of view and gives an opinion.
There are many different reasons why some parents want to keep their children with other family members during their work time. to consider or examine in speech or writing
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of all, it is more safer
to keep your children with someone you know very Suggestion
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Moreover
, it is more benifficial
for the children to grow up between their family members -even if they are not their parents- because that will improve their promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
sence
of belonging.
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center
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firstly
, children can learn many different things there, including how to depend on themselves and how to communicate with others and that will make them stronger in the future. Secondly
, family members may not be allways
able to take care about the children, at all times; all the time and on every occasion
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whereas
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more comfortable for the parents to leave their children in a childcare
center
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allways
.
In conclusion, it is the parent choice to decide where to keep their children during their work time. at all times; all the time and on every occasion
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