The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetable per day in the uk from 2001 to 2008

The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetable per day in the uk from 2001 to 2008
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of men, women and children who had a diet that consists
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five portions of fruits and
vegetable
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vegetables
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each day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
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, it can be seen that the highest percentage of all people consuming five portions of fruit and vegetable was women,
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the
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of children is the lowest.
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, a significant increase in the proportion of people keeping
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healthy diet
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be seen over the period given. The percentage of women eating fruits and
vegetable
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started a bit over 20% in 2001. The
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riched a peak of almost 35%, before falling
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30% in the final years. The rate of men eating vegetables and fruits is approximatively stable, around 16%, in the first three years. Since 2004 the proportion climbed gradually to peak
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about 27% in 2006 and 2007, after which dropped to 26%. The
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of children suffered a similar growth until 2006, when the
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increased significantly, almost 5%, reaching 25% in 2007 and around 24% in the final year.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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