Human activities have negative effects on plants and animals all over the world. Some people think it is too late to do something about it. Others think there is still some time to take actions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Human

activities have dramatically changed

totall

constituting the full quantity or extent; complete

total

environment of the world. Some people

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believed

believes

that there is no chance to improve the habitat,

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however others

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however, others

think there is still enough time to improve it. There are rational arguments on both sides of

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topic which will be discussed in detail, followed by my own view. On the one hand, earth looks like a dead place in comparison with

past

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the past

. Most of the places that were full of trees and animals have been changed as if they are

desert

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deserted

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, green gases and global warming cause drastically climate and environmental changes.

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, considerable numbers of lakes

are do not have

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don't have

do not have

have not had

haven't had

are not having

aren't having

any water and they are dry.

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, there is no chance to return habitat to condition of several years ago, whatsoever.

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, most parts of the world are in a good condition as like there

were

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was

nobody

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there. Government authorities and people can have essential roles

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improving earth condition.

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goverments

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

should invest more on researching new generation technologies to solve green gas problem or people take part in charity affairs to clean rivers and habitat from rubbish. So, under no circumstances is it acceptable to be

disapointed

disappointingly unsuccessful

disappointed

from

one issue

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the one issue

that can be

solve

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solved

. To

conculed

decide by reasoning; draw or come to a conclusion

conclude

, there are valid arguments on both sides of the controversy,

howover

despite anything to the contrary (usually following a concession)

however

It is my firm opinion that attention should be paid to solve urgent and vital places.

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would be highly suggested that start

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would highly suggest that start

would highly suggested that start

to decrease human activities

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in contact with

against

agents

environment without a wasting time.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Human activities have negative effects on plants and animals all over the world. Some people think it is too late to do something about it. Others think there is still some time to take actions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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