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some people believe that children are given too much of free time. they feel that it should be use to do more school work.

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These days children are given a lot of free time after
school which
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school, which
 they can use to do a lot of good things.
some
Suggestion
Some
 people think that it should be used to do more
school
 studies and others think the opposite.
it
Suggestion
It
 will include that, we will go through some of the positive and negative effects on children and what activities they should do in
there
of them or themselves
their
 leisure.
To begin
 with, I like to start with a scenario which will be on giving extra homework to the children to finish at home after
school
.
a
Suggestion
A
 student tends to study a lot of different subjects with
assign
Suggestion
assigning
 teachers for a course who will give their sort of projects and assignments as homework. After the study, give the chance to students to understand more about what they are studying at
school
,
also
 will help them to ignite their knowledge about the world.
on
Suggestion
On
 the other hand, if we say that after
school
 student should not get any homework from
school
.
this
Suggestion
This
 step will give students to rejuvenate themselves and do other extracurricular activities
such
 as playing games and participate in sports championships to follow their dreams. In a nutshell, as everyone has their dreams and way to live their life which should give at least that much free time to students after
school
 to find themselves and nurture their abilities.
school
Suggestion
School
 knowledge surely will lead a student to a better
future but
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future, but
 being able to take a break and understand that knowledge is
also
 very crucial for an individual.

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