The gap between rich and poor is increasing. What problems does it cause? What solution s can you suggest.

#gap

I does not like poverty.Eliminating the

proverty

something owned; any tangible or intangible possession that is owned by someone

property

from the poverty can be the best option as long as I believe.It should

applies

Suggestion

apply

for all of the rural people in

this

country.These

days money

Accept comma addition

days, money

and power are ruling the world, these reasons are creating a conflict between poor and rich people and destroying many societies. That’s why

this

gap will cause many problems, and there must be solutions to solve

this

issue. On one hand, several situations led to

this

gap between people, and cause problems.

First

, war is a major reason that will happen between people, due to poverty, starvation and diseases.

Second

, people will accept to get

exploit

Suggestion

exploited

by rich people, to work in low salaries or for food to stay alive, in

this

way rich people can reach their goals and make more profits without expenses.

However

, the world is controlled by rich people and

this

leads to a conflict in ethics and conducts, between the society and there won’t be

respect

Suggestion

respected

among the strata of society.

For example

, Nike company

pay

Suggestion

pays

around 3$ per day for its employees, and the shoes cost them around 6$ and hey sell it for hundred of dollar or more.

Tue Feb 18 2020

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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The gap between rich and poor is increasing. What problems does it cause? What solution s can you suggest.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Transport preference among young people in different countries.

Since it is so easy to reach a large audience on the internet, people have to be exceptionally talented to become famous these days. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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