The gap between rich and poor is increasing. What problems does it cause? What solution s can you suggest.

I does not like poverty.Eliminating the
proverty
something owned; any tangible or intangible possession that is owned by someone
property
from the poverty can be the best option as long as I believe.It should
applies
Suggestion
apply
for all of the rural people in
this
country.These
days money
Accept comma addition
days, money
and power are ruling the world, these reasons are creating a conflict between poor and rich people and destroying many societies. That’s why
this
gap will cause many problems, and there must be solutions to solve
this
issue. On one hand, several situations led to
this
gap between people, and cause problems.
First
, war is a major reason that will happen between people, due to poverty, starvation and diseases.
Second
, people will accept to get
exploit
Suggestion
exploited
by rich people, to work in low salaries or for food to stay alive, in
this
way rich people can reach their goals and make more profits without expenses.
However
, the world is controlled by rich people and
this
leads to a conflict in ethics and conducts, between the society and there won’t be
respect
Suggestion
respected
among the strata of society.
For example
, Nike company
pay
Suggestion
pays
around 3$ per day for its employees, and the shoes cost them around 6$ and hey sell it for hundred of dollar or more.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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