In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe is is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

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In todays world, most of the cities are facing the challenge of constructing the new

homes but

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homes, but

the option available is to develop the

suburs

a residential district located on the outskirts of a city

suburbs

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, few masses think that it is necessary to conserve these locations and I completely agree with the opinion. I will substantiate my point of view in

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regards. Those who support the development and giving the latest infrastructure to

undevelop

not developed

undeveloped

suburbs. It is necessary to build new houses to

accomodate

be agreeable or acceptable to

accommodate

increasing population in

metro city

Suggestion

metro cities

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is happening more in cities as compared to villages if government authority made jobs available in

vaillages

a community of people smaller than a town

villages

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then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

rural

depopulization

the condition of having reduced numbers of inhabitants (or no inhabitants at all)

depopulation

will reduce drastically. If

authorities

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the authorities

fails

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fail

to do

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then

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they should develop the suburbs to give accomodation facilities to migrants from villages to cities.

Furthermore

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this

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, it is necessary to preserve the outskirt nature of cities to balance the

polutions

the people who inhabit a territory or state

populations

pollution

in city regions.

Suggestion

The

Thai

authorities should produce more jobs and extra income sources in villages and rural areas. So that people will stay at

there

of them or themselves

their

native places.

This

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will reduce the conurbation and

also

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reduce the traffic in metros. Due to

this

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pollution will decrease and governing authorities will spend less amount on developing the

infrasturcture

the basic structure or features of a system or organization

infrastructure

suburbs

Suggestion

the suburbs

. The same amount would be

useds

employed in accomplishing something

used

for other better purposes. Scarcity of natural resource will increase in big cities. To conclude

this

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government authority should work in villages so that they conserve the outskirt environment of cities which are degrading day by day.

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

245 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Urbanization
Ecological benefits
Biodiversity conservation
Carbon sequestration
Sustainable development
Eco-friendly building materials
Green architecture
Government policies
Urban sprawl
Infrastructure
Smart planning
Agricultural lands
Rural areas
Population growth
Environmental sensitivity

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