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These days, some people think that physical strength is important for success in sports, others think that mental health is more significant. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Now-a-days people are showing more interest in sports activities and are adapting different mentalities to be
succesfull
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
. While some people argue that physical strength is more important and others feel being mentally fit has more contribution in the level of
success
.
This
 essay argues why being in shape is critical for
success
,
Accept space
,
but why still being mentally fit adds more value towards
success
. On one hand considerable amount of
population
Suggestion
the population
 feels staying physically fit can help them to succeed in sports. Growing
muscules
one of the contractile organs of the body
muscles
 and developing body can increase energy levels and stamina which
finally helps
Suggestion
finally help
 to perform to the fullest.
For instance
, a well known Indian cricketer who started working on his fitness levels, made him improve his cricketing abilities and now currently he is reputed as the world's number one batsmen. Physical strength pushes a person's energy level's and stamina which are important for
success
. One the other hand mental health is
also
 important for an athlete to perform effectively. Being mentally stable makes a person to perform with more intensity and concentration which
further
 helps them to focus more on the game.
For example
, Dhoni being overweight didn't stop him from being the best wicket-keeper as he had no problem with mental health. Increase in focus and concentration in the game is developed by being mentally fit. To conclude, being successful is mainly derived from being fit in terms of physically and mentally.
This
 essay discussed why being in shape is important and
in addition
 it
also
 discussed why being emotionally fit is much more significant for
success
. In my opinion being emotionally fit will motivate people more to acquire
success
 than body building.
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