Nowadays, people always throw old things away and buy new things, whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects does the phenomenon lead do?

Nowadays, people always throw old things away and buy new things, whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause
this
phenomenon? What effects does the
phenomenon
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phenomenal
lead do? In recent years, all across the world, it is
serious issue
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a serious issue
that people
not use
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don't use
their objects
in
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at
long times.
Also they
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Also, they
change
easily
change
new products. In
this
regard, it would be meaningful to identify how
such
an issue has occurred and what kind of problems will be arises.
To begin
with, there are many different factors of
this
situation. In the
first
place,
public
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the public
has
being
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
been
easy to buy the new items
such
as cloths, electronic devices and so on because there are increasing number of factories have existed and built in over the world.
Therefore they
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Therefore, they
can provide a large amount of goods to cheap and fast to people. Which
make
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makes
people regard to buy new items better than repair the old item.
For example
, these day smartphones after service fee is too heavy.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
if one’s
cellphone
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cell phone
was broken down, they buy a new one than fix that.
this
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This
is because there
are
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is
a lot of reasonable price of
smartphones thanks
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smartphones, thanks
to large produce by plants.
Furthermore
, there are a lot of new complex type products. It is never
replacement
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a replacement
to
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for
of
old any things
such
as air flyer, robotic vacuum cleaner, dishwashers and so on.
This
is becoming a trend so people would buy more the more new items. Since
this
situation is a matter of concern to everyone, its influence is never insignificant.
First
of all, the environment pollution will be serious. As increasing public demand, the plants would be made more products which people went to
change
their items.
Finally
it
lead
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leads
to crucial air pollution and water contamination issues. To illustrate, It is
really important problem
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a really important problem
in China, about fine dust
form
a giver or sender
from
the factory, which far more will be spread in all around
world
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the world
. In other word, It is really harmful public’s health. People would suffer from lethal disease. Another worth mentioning is that these
circumstance
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circumstances
are linked
by
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with
excessive consumption.
Moreover
, a lot of people will increasingly lose recognize
change
their items frequently so they don’t have awaken why old goods do repair. In
this
result people
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result, people
may be able to undergo
personal financial problem
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the personal financial problem
. In conclusion, various factors have cause related to purchase new objects. It could cause serious problems in our future, so proper action should be taken.
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