25. Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to poorer countries rather than financial aid. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is a fact that many people in developing nations remain suffering from poverty even with the financial assistance from wealthy ones.

Therefore

, some people opine that developing nations should apply other methods to assist poorer nations rather than provide money. I personally agree with them totally and the essay will discuss

this

opinion.

To begin

with, financial

support

from wealthy nations to poorer ones is not only a temporary so

lution but

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solution, but

also

create more negative outcomes for the receivers. Free 

food

or easy money will nurture the receivers to  become la

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lazy

nd will lose their mo

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motivation

o struggle for the better lives. Meanwhile, the annual financial budget for the richer nations to aid the poor ones will

also

create bu

rden f

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a burden

or their own taxpayers as well.

For example

, under an

nual financial donation f

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an annual financial donation

rom United ki

ngdom a

a domain in which something is dominant

Kingdom

fter the World War II, the living and financial situations in Af

rican continent h

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the African continent

ave not been im

proving s

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improved

ince

then

and even have been deteriorating due to the declining financial

support

from Un

ited Kingdom i

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the United Kingdom

n the past couples of years.

Therefore

, financial aid is not a good option for guiding the poorer nations out of their situations.

Besides

financial

support

that weakens the receivers' motivation, wealthy nations should carry out other methods to assist the poorer ones. The methods will focus on improving the receivers' motivation, survival skills and knowledge.

Therefore

, they will be wise enough to rule their nations and improve their living environments.

For instance

, teaching agricultural technique will assist poor people to grow their local domestic

food

for self-supply and teaching modern technology will help them produce their own appliances or vehicles. Once people in poorer countries are able to grow their own

food

and have their own domestic products, their living condition will improve and they will live on

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with

for

hemselves. In conclusion, financial

support

from de

veloped c

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developing

ountries will provide te

mporary solution f

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a temporary solution

or the receivers in developing ones;

moreover

, only the methods that assist the receivers to become independent by growing their own

food

and producing their own appliances or vehicles will provide permanent solutions for eradicating poverty worldwide.

Therefore

, I agree the ad

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hat the methods,

such

as conveying agricultural technique, teaching knowledge of modern technology, and so on are  the best option to help the poorer nations rather than financial

support

.