Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views.
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this
modern world, perspectives Linking Words
of
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on
animals
are varied between Use synonyms
people
. Some Use synonyms
people
think about caging them in zoos or forests Use synonyms
while
others think it is illogical to limit Linking Words
animals
’ movements. I am going to discuss these views Use synonyms
according to
environmental, personal and economic perspectives. Keeping some Change preposition
from
animals
in zoos will protect them against predators, bad weather, and food availability. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, keeping Linking Words
animals
free is more logical than isolating them because if we keep Use synonyms
animals
caged, they would not be able to have fresh air and chase other Use synonyms
animals
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, it is cruel Linking Words
keeping
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to keep
animals
confined in small spaces. It is advisable to put our efforts into keeping our creatures in their natural habitats, in order to give them the opportunity to experience normal life. Keeping Use synonyms
animals
is essential because some Use synonyms
animals
are in fact becoming extinct. Use synonyms
Although
keeping these Linking Words
animals
is costly, the profits made by keeping these Use synonyms
animals
are substantial. Take Indian lions Use synonyms
for example
; a wide range of Linking Words
people
travel to India to see these Use synonyms
animals
in circuses in India. Use synonyms
However
, some Linking Words
people
think that governments should invest the money in improving the infrastructure of their nations Use synonyms
instead
. Building new electrical power Linking Words
station
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stations
for instance
, is more important than spending thousands of pounds to preserve certain creatures from extinction. Linking Words
Lastly
, keeping Linking Words
animals
is important for study and research Use synonyms
whereas
others think we have no right to use Linking Words
animals
for entertainment and in labs. Use synonyms
To conclude
, keeping Linking Words
animals
in zoos might have many values but it is irrational to keep these Use synonyms
animals
away from their natural habitat. The reasons are that Use synonyms
besides
they are not vulnerable creatures, they have the right to survive independently because of having feelings and emotions as Linking Words
human
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
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- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion