Some people think that main factors influencing a child's development these days are things such as television, friends and music. Others believe that family still remains more important.

Different people have distinct viewpoint. Some section of society deem that parents definitely have

major role

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a major role

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in

the

development

of their

child

along with they get older where as others opine that people in majority

also

considered that surrounding

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societal

factors apart from family now influencing children much more. The following paragraphs would shed light

on to

to on

onto

the approaches before making the final conclusion along with my perspective. To commence with the

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shared

in the

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statements.

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and foremost, there are no

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denying or questioning the tenets of especially a religion

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prospect that how some factors apart from the family that significantly impact on

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the child's development

a child's development

development

.

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television and internet

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the right to enter

access

.

Hence

children potentially spend much more time on

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than they used to do in

past

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the past

. Beside

this

, friends

also

play

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an important role

important roles

and have

important effect

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an important effect

as a

child

will often copy peers virtually that they admire and respect.

This

could be positive behaviour,

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conversely, it

could

also

be flawed. There was a survey

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was being

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"The Times Of India" in 2012, which stated that around 300 crores rupees have been

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spent

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the treatment of teenagers as they are addicted to drugs and smoking throughout

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the countries

.

However

, others believe that family have

most significant impact

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a more significant impact

more significant impact

towards their children because children spend most of their time with their family especially in their foremost years. Not only confidence, socialisation skills, moral values,

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views, but

also

many momentous factors they develop in their life through interaction with them. Proof of

this

important proliferation can be seen in the difference between some children. Beside

this

, those grow up in

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impaired in function; especially of a bodily system or organ

dysfunctional

home often eventually have problems themselves whilst those that are brought up after superseded in a warm and close environment end up with more confident and secure in adult life. In a gist, it can be said that "Every coin has two sides". In the same manner, both aspects of

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a child's development

the child's development

development

are imperative for both groups of people and cannot be denied.

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would like to infer that

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the family

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has

significant impact towards their

child

's

development

.