in many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.

In the modernized globe, it is

undeniable truth

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an undeniable truth

the undeniable truth

that increasing demand for

shelters but

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shelters, but

the limited space available for constructing homes except in the suburb

ereas

a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)

areas

.

however

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However

, according to some people, countryside should be protected from construction activity for better environment prospect.

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my opinion, it is important to build homes which

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basic need

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a basic need

basic needs

for people's

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life, but

,

also

protect the environment to a certain extent.

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will be entangled in subsequent paragraphs before reaching

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of marriages and offspring; recognized as lawful

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conclusion. To commence with, cities have become over crowded due to urbanization and the open space is only available for parks as well gardens.

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Thus

, it is better to build new homes in outer side of cities

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in place of, or as an alternative to

instead

of

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an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

.

additionally

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, people use areas which are

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barren, so

, utilize that land into

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building

homes.

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addition to people can

also

afford that price and live peacefully.

Also

, it is beneficial for

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the health

of citizens because there is less pollution and live near to

serene beauty

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the serene beauty

of green nature.

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side, there should be strict rules regarding the construction of residential areas in the surrounding areas of cities by

regime

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the regime

and environmentalists. They

also

come up with new ideas or innovations which might help

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with

the prevent the more buildings in rural areas.

Furthermore

, desolate and barren land which will

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convert

into the public areas. To conclude, after analysing the both perspectives, it is the development in

this

comtemporary

characteristic of the present

contemporary

world but

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world, but

it is harmful for the environment and do not prevent the all

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areas

for building new shelters. And

also

, people use only certain land which is useful for construction activity.