Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to GM crops to increase the production of food grains. Discuss the Advantages and Disadvantages of this approach.

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Yesterday’s fiction is today’s reality.
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colossal developments have taken place in
agriculture which
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agriculture, which
we couldn’t even think of earlier. It is a highly debatable issue as to whether these improvements in fertilisers and
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are a blessing or a curse. Some people believe that turning to
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GM
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the yield from plants in a single growing season
crops
will increase the
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grain
production
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. In
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essay, I intend to delve into the advantages and disadvantages of
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approach.
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with, the
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has saved people from tedious work and in the
mean time
the time between one event, process, or period and another
meantime
increased the
production
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markedly. All
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is needed to meet the demands of the burgeoning
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.
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, genetic modification of
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has given us
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species which need little or no insecticides and no fertilizers. The quality of
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has
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improved.
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, a nut protein has been added to soya bean to increase the protein content. We have more choices, even colour and shape can
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be changed. We have sweeter fruits and square watermelons are some examples.
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, disease- and drought-resistant plants that require fewer environmental resources (
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as water and fertilizer).
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, even though the seed is more expensive, these GM crops lower the costs of
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by reducing inputs of machinery, fuel, and chemical pesticides.
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, due to more effective pest control, crop yields are often higher. On the downside,
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technology
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has reduced the need for manpower and many people are now jobless.
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, genetic modification, is considered as unnatural and as it is relatively new, people are
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concerned about its long-term harmful side effects. It is biologically altered.
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, biotech foods may pose a human health risk. Some methods are
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dangerous to the environment as there is contamination of the neighbouring crops
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the altered gene pool.
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, the excessive
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of genetically modified foods will be rendered ineffective over time because the pests that these toxins used to deter might eventually develop resistance towards them. To conclude, as every garden has weeds,
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developments have their pros and cons. But the use of GMOs can only benefit to humans when it is used for increasing the availability, quality of
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, medical care, and contributing to a cleaner environment,
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no use of modified crops. We should know where to draw the line and take maximum advantage of
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technology
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minimising its harmful effects.

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