Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion?

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Healthcare and

education

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are

primary importance

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the primary importance

to citizens, and many tend to see the both areas as

government

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responsibilities while others hesitate. To a certain point, I firmly believe that

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must be free of charge throughout the country.

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of all, the

government

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funding for

education

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is of great benefit to children, their family and the society as a whole. Because some parents could not afford the cost of their

children

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children's

child's

education

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with their meagre salary, compared with the

unaffordable

that you have the financial means for

affordable

tuition fees being charged by tertiary institutions. In Vietnam, a middle-class family spends approximately 50% income for the monthly school fee for children. And the low-income families, which are only enough to buy food and pay for their monthly bills, their children

were limited their

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were limited in their

were limited to their

were limited with their

potential

with

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poor academic experience. By providing free

education

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to the residents it is hoped that more skilled and educated workers would be created.

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, access to health care is a basic human right and a measure to ensure a decent standard of living.

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, humans should not have to worry about if they can pay to stay healthy.

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, some

illness persons

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illness, persons

who could not find the way to cover the hospital cost, they stay home suffering, until it's too late to start treatment. Needless to say, health care treatment cost

are

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, in general, expensive to thousands of people destitute.

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, a healthy nation is the base of a country and it is a

government

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's responsibility to make the proper medical treatment and service available for all.

Government

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’s financial support is

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required. In conclusion,

education

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and healthy life are two basic needs of every citizen and a

government

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is in fact, formed to make sure no citizen is deprived of his basic needs, and all these must be given importance and unrestricted from all levels of the society.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

fundamental human rights
boosts the country's economy
productivity
public funding
equality and accessibility
socio-economic status
privatized
disparities
prioritize
people's well-being
inefficiencies
bureaucratic challenges
mixed approach
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Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

The advance in air travel are focused only in first-class and this seems to have left others with no benefits at all. Do you agree or disagree?

Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some parents are worried about increasing levels of violence in TV,Video games and other entertainments for Children's leisure. how does this affects the children? how do you think this can be tackled?

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is yhis? Do you think it is a positive or negative development.