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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, everyone aims to have a successful career. While some people believe that to be successful
university
 or college
education
 is important, others argue it to be unnecessary and
one
 should start working after their secondary schooling. I would agree with the former view,
however
, both the sides will be
dicussed
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discussed
.
To begin
 with, those who believe that joining a
job
staright
successive (without a break)
straight
 after school is better argue that in higher institutions only
theorectical
concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
 knowledge is imparted whereas in real life practical knowledge is more important.
For instance
, to become a car mechanic only practical knowledge about how to repair a car is required and
one
 gains expertise in skills with experience.
Moreover
, by doing a
job
 straight after school
one
 can start earning and become self- dependent. In other word they do not need to ask for pocket money, while their counterparts be still be dependent upon their parents.
However
, I strongly
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
 that
university
education
 is
improtant
of great significance or value
important
.
One
 of the
benefit
Suggestion
benefits
 of
university
education
 is that an individual learn basics of the major course.
This
 narrows down their focus and helps them to gain perfection in their field.
Furthermore
, nowadays it is essential for an individual to
aquire
come into the possession of something concrete or abstract
acquire
university
education
 to qualify for a
job
. Many professions
such
 as doctor, lawyer require
license
Suggestion
a license
 which can
be only gained
Suggestion
be gained only
 by appropriate qualification. If the individual
have
Suggestion
has
 a
degree
Accept comma addition
degree, then
then
 only they can earn a white collar
job
 and a good salary. In conclusion,
although
 by joining a
job
staright
successive (without a break)
straight
 after school can make start earning early and self
dependent but
Accept comma addition
dependent, but
 to
aquire
come into the possession of something concrete or abstract
acquire
 a good
job
one
 needs a good
university
education
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Academic qualifications
  • Specialized skills
  • In-depth knowledge
  • Personal growth
  • Social development
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • Career progression
  • Professional networking
  • Education
  • Work experience
  • Successful career
  • Personal interests
  • Career goals
  • Decision-making process
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