You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Johnson As you may know, I am working full pace for quite a while and I do get exhausted by the point I leave work and I do not Learn sufficiently

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to lack of sleep and not resting enough so it is becoming almost impossible for me to resume taking classes. I am writing

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letter to inform you, I am no

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part time

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course. I would like to ask you to eliminate my course for

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6 months and I will inform you if I can continue my studies again by

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. Because I am working on some important tasks right now, which requires a huge effort in order to deliver it in a proper stage and

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decent quality to my clients. Would you kindly inform me of your decision on my request? Thank you for considering my situation favourably. sincerely yours Arian Abolfazli

arian.ab.freelancer

Feb 19, 2020

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