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some people think the government is wasting money on the art and that this money could be batter spent elsewhere

#people #government #money #art #batter
Art
 is considered as an essential element to the society, which it
give
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gives
 to it has
unique identity
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a unique identity
. Some people claim that
government
Suggestion
the government
 should not waste the
money
 on the
art
, while others argue
itis
Suggestion
it is
 beneficial to the community. I believe spending
money
 to some extent will help the life.
Art
 can vary from small painting to producing movies, which means spending can be a small amount or huge. It can
help youngster
Suggestion
help a youngster
 to find their way out of the street, and find their talent
.
Accept space
.
this
Suggestion
This
 talent can grow up to become a profitable business. What is more people
can spent
Suggestion
can spend
 their free time to visit
art
 galleries, go to
theaters
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatres
, or watch a live concert. Obviously
this
 will help to remove life stress and bring some joy. On the country level
art
 can be a good source
of
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for
found
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finding
 and can make countries richer. Tourism can come to visit the ancient place and enjoy the contemporary
art
 and museums.
Movies industry
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The movie industry
Movie industry
have
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has
 a big return and can
hair
perceive (sound) via the auditory sense
hear
 sound of employee
.
Accept space
.
one
Suggestion
One
 true example
to
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of
this
 is
USA
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the USA
. Many countries decorate her cities by painting and shaping the tree on beautiful ways,
this
help
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helps
 to
give indicator
Suggestion
give an indicator
 on how it is developed. It is
mutual benefit
Suggestion
a mutual benefit, although the
a mutual benefit although the
although
 the
art
need
Suggestion
needs
 a lot of
money but
Accept comma addition
money, but
 will return more
money
 if it used in a proper way.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
 not only government should increase the spent, but
also
 the charity organization should try to put it touch on it.
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