The table below shows the results of survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the activities, facilities and opening hours.
The table gives information about
results
of Correct article usage
the results
survey
of different Correct article usage
the survey
activities
like range
of Add an article
the range
a range
activities
, club facilities and opening hours
for female members
and male members
of a city sports club.
Overall
, the table indicates that female members
were highest
percentage of satisfied and not satisfied with opening Change the article
the highest
hours
and range
of activities
respectively. Inversely least
amount of percentages Correct article usage
the least
are
female Change the verb form
is
members
with opening hours
and range
of activities
. In contrast
, however
, the rest of the male members
are almost opposite for
female Change preposition
apply
members
.
It can see that the range
of activities
in
male Change preposition
among
members
is generally happy with 95% and only 5% unhappy. In contrast
, however
, the female members
seven
out of ten Add a missing verb
were seven
percentage
satisfied and almost a Replace the word
per cent
third
were dissatisfied.
The both
genders were more in agreement about club facilities. Only 14% Remove the article
Both
Change preposition
of female
female
and 10% Fix the agreement mistake
females
Change preposition
of male
male
were not satisfied with these, and the majority (64% and 63% respectively) were extremely happy.
Fix the agreement mistake
males
Finally
, in the opening hours
very large number of (97%) female Add a comma
,hours
members
were positive
Correct article usage
a positive
response
and only less than one in twenty (3%) percentage were Fix the agreement mistake
responses
negative
Add an article
the negative
a negative
response
. And male Fix the agreement mistake
responses
members
were happy with almost double (63%) about the unhappy people (37%).Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, in contrast".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words activities, range, hours, members with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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