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Attitude is as important as knowledge in a test situation . To what extent do you agree? Write at least 250 words

#attitude #test #situation
Attitude
 is something
that is
 innate in every individual. Sometimes it can be caused by individual genetic make-up, which explains some
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 copied from their parents.
However
, it is
also
 influenced by social
environment meaning
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environment, meaning
 the more the person exposed to that kind of environment,
the likely
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the more likely
the likelier
 he/she will be
adapt
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adapted
on
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to
 it and be like it.
For
example if
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example, if
 the child belongs to a family who only sees negative in life, possibility when the child grow up his/her outlook will be more on negativism like having poor self-esteem, dependability or inability to stand alone, and those things are difficult to change and lasts forever. All people started from nothing. When were an
infants
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infant
, the only thing that we knew in order to survive comes from reflexes like sucking reflex; until
such
 time, when the people surrounds us taught us the activities of daily
living including
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living, including
 walking, eating, speaking; which continues as we grow older where we explore our resources including books, internet, people, experiences, etc., And the more we live, the more
knowledge
 we gain. But those
knowledge
 will not
last
 forever
in contrast
 to
attitude
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the attitude
attitudes
, because as we aged, our brain cells, which handles our memory and
knowledge
, dies with human flailing body showing that even you are the brightest person in the whole wide world, when the time come and your body declines, the only thing that remains with you is your
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 and
attitude
. In
crisis
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a crisis
, attitudes matter most as it guides the individual regarding proper decision making.
For example
, most of the Good Samaritan are not healthcare
provider meaning
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provider, meaning
 they do not have the
knowledge
 to cure, but their instinct to help save lives drives them on their decisions like providing the victim
recue
free from harm or evil
rescue
race
 breathing
first
 before sending them to hospital or looking for the nearest hospital in the area. Generally speaking, it is not the
knowledge
 which is important, it is the
attitude
. Because
attitude
 in what characterize the personality the individual have and it cannot be easily gain or change.

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