You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate and requesting to arrange a separate single room
from
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for
next
month.
Although
,
there are so many problems, I am stating some of those very unacceptable here in order to draw your kind attention. Remove the comma
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Firstly
, he used to stay awake till the
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night
and keep watching movies and listening to music at a very loud volume with full bass. Change preposition
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Secondly
, he allows visitors more often at our place to cheer all night long while keeping the lights on. Finally
, he borrows my belongings without prior permission.
Particularly, during my terms, it makes me struggle more on concentrating my studies as well as having a good night sleep. As a result
, I cannot do well in my exams and consequently
getting poor grades.
However
, I cannot let it go as It's affecting my health and study both ways and needed to change my accommodation immediately.
Therefore
, I would be grateful if you could arrange me
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for
next
month.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.