Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadventages of being self-employed?

It is true that many people are trying to start a
business
instead
of spending their lives in someone else’s company. I believe the main issue here is that people don’t believe companies are giving what they deserve even though many of the employees are pushing
theirselves
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
to do their best.
On the other hand
, being self-employed may not be suitable for everyone.
To begin
with, the risk of failing is a major disadvantage of being self-employed. There are many people who intend to create an innovative
business
model to extend their work.
However
, many of them are failing to find a unique
business
and
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
results in copying other companies.
For example
, nowadays in Turkey, a desert called “
lokma
” is a good example
for
Suggestion
of
emphasishing
the act of giving special importance or significance to something
emphasizing
emphasising
that. After someone has established
this
type of
store
to sell “
lokma
”, filled with different kinds of chocolate, many others have followed him to make the same concept. But, the great deal of them are
failed
Suggestion
failing
to reach consumers.
Therefore
, they lost their stores as well as their money on that.
Furthermore
, it might be more stressful than one’s thought.
For example
, my father was an owner of a
jewelry
an adornment (as a bracelet or ring or necklace) made of precious metals and set with gems (or imitation gems)
jewellery
store
a few years ago. He had to shut down his
store
since he was struggling to resist the
economical
Suggestion
economic
crisis which led him to pay a lot of taxes, the rent, and many other compulsory charges. All these issues were affecting him very negatively.
Thus
, if someone is going to own a
business
, it might affect his/her mental health as well as physical health because of
stress
Suggestion
the stress
. In conclusion, there are a lot people who prefer to work for their own company or
store
to work in another place. But, I think people should consider the risk of failing or the stress they will go through before deciding to be self-employed.
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