As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have for the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problem

With the increasing number of people travelling, the demand for more flights has
became
Suggestion
become
greated
greater in size or importance or degree
greater
than ever.
Although
tourism is wholly positive, as it allows people to see and interact with different mindsets, cultures and backgrounds
ans
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
eventually become more open-minded as well as give a lot of individuals and parties a source of income, it does come with a price which is paid by the environment. More tourism means more flights, which means more fuel used to feed up the planes and more
gaz
the state of matter distinguished from the solid and liquid states by: relatively low density and viscosity; relatively great expansion and contraction with changes in pressure and temperature; the ability to diffuse readily; and the spontaneous tendency to become distributed uniformly throughout any container
gas
emissions coming from these planes. These toxic
gazes
the state of matter distinguished from the solid and liquid states by: relatively low density and viscosity; relatively great expansion and contraction with changes in pressure and temperature; the ability to diffuse readily; and the spontaneous tendency to become distributed uniformly throughout any container
gases
contributes
Suggestion
contribute
directly to global
warming which
Accept comma addition
warming, which
is approaching its peak. Some of the consequences are
climat
the weather in some location averaged over some long period of time
climate
claimed
climates
and habitat change, which will cause the destruction of nature and the extinction of animals and humans. To solve
this
problem, few measures could be utilized. Technology
has came
Suggestion
has come
a long way and going electric is the new move in
automotiv industry
Suggestion
the automotive industry
automotive industry
, so to avoid the problems coming using fuel electric planes need to be considered. People tend to lean more towards flights because they are
usully
under normal conditions
usually
more
confortable
providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief
comfortable
and a faster transportation method. Investing in fast electric trains could
also
help solving
this
problem. Electric trains are fast and fairly comfortable and luxurious.

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