Some people say it is important to keep your home and workplace tidy, with everything else organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

It is said by many that it is essential to keep
one
’s
workplace
and
home
neat and tidy, with all things systematically in the proper place. I completely agree with
this
view for several reasons. On the
one
hand, there are a few reasons why other people are on the flip side.
Firstly
, nowadays individuals are far too busy to keep up with organised
workplace
and
home
.
For example
, my friends, who work in the marketing department hardly finds,
time
to clean up their homes as well as office, because most of their
time
is taken by telemarketing and visiting customers.
Secondly
, elderly people due to old age are not able to perform their daily routine
properly
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properly, therefore
therefore
, unable to follow tidiness in their homes.
Finally
, sick people are not strong enough to maintain things orderly. To explain, my neighbour was not able to do any work at
home
while she was suffering from malaria and her house was in a mess until she recovered from it. If people are going through
such
situations, they would not keep their
home
or
workplace
tidy, while it is essential for them to keep it clean.
However
, I disagree with these reasons because
one
can get maid to help them in
above situation
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the above situation
.
On the other hand
, there are many along with me, who likes to keep
home
and
workplace
tidy for many reasons.
To begin
, keeping things organised in proper order makes life much easier as
one
can find their stuff without having to search for it.
For instance
, I always keep my things systematically,
nevertheless
, my relatives had visited our house and it had
became
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become
messy due to many people in the house, which made me look for each and everything, which was
also
consumed my
time
and
therefore
I was late for my job.
Moreover
, keeping things in order makes
home
and
workplace
not only look better, but
also
makes a job quicker.
For example
, when my
workplace
was tidy and everything else was in order, it was super easy to serve my customers quickly.
Finally
, it creates good impression as people can see
one
is much organised
person
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people
be it
home
or
workplace
. In conclusion, along with others I think keeping
home
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the home
and
workplace
orderly is important, as it saves
time
and place looks awesome as well as impress people.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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