Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. What are the advantages and disadvantages

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modern era art is a great medical treatment for human relaxation.

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, most artists earn a decent income from their

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,

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they are struggling to make a living. I believe great things will happen if

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receive aid from

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.The pros and cons

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it is noteworthy that most

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, s art area main job and

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is the primary source of income.

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to that, most of them are obviously

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about

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what they do and they are spending massive time and millions of

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for creating

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craft. As an example, prominent film director Mr Karan Johor who

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in India contributed millions of money

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a historical film which is

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Padmawathi.But he did not recover all of

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fund

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which they had spent.

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, I believe the governing body should

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to them for continuing their work and

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industry.

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, most

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individuals are living capital city

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the country

for facilitating

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their work the main aspect is they

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them

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. After getting old they struggle

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fulfilling

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their basic needs

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as housing, food and medical

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.

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the state should

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, some pension scheme to look after them.  

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, art is the passion of the culture and tradition of the country.

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the government would not be contributing much money

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that stream because it

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unemployment rates.

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contemporary society, most

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artists, talented and creative people

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make a great profession. They can reach their lucrative easily by using technology.

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, I trust. They can earn more money, without support from others.

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, artists need

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to continue their tremendous and fascinating works

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profession

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because the government should look after them from

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time by giving

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support.