You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Accomodation

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Accommodation

Officer 54, Catherine Road Edinburg Dear Sir/Madam, First of

all

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I would like to thank you for allocating me

an

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accomodation

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accommodation

at the college hostel.

Besides

, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate and

requesting

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a separate single room from next month. Despite

of

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having so many problems living together, I am stating some of those are very serious.

Firstly

, he used to stay awake till

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late

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and keep watching movies and listening to music at a very loud volume and high bass.

Secondly

, he allows visitors often at our place and

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all night long

while

keeping the lights on until they are finished.

Finally

, he uses my belongings without prior permission and missing regularly.

For instance

, during my terms, it makes me struggle more on concentrating my studies and having a good night’s sleep.

As a result

, I cannot do well in exams and

consequently

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poor grades. In

this

circumstance, I cannot let it go as it is affecting my health and study both ways and

needed

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to change my accommodation immediately.

Therefore

, I would be grateful if you could arrange

me

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a single room from next month. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Mahmudul Hasan