You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Accomodation
Correct your spelling
Accommodation
Officer 54, Catherine Road Edinburg Dear Sir/Madam, First of
all
Add the comma(s)
all,
show examples
I would like to thank you for allocating me
an
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
accomodation
Correct your spelling
accommodation
at the college hostel.
Besides
, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate and
requesting
Wrong verb form
request
show examples
a separate single room from next month. Despite
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
having so many problems living together, I am stating some of those are very serious.
Firstly
, he used to stay awake till
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
late
night
Change preposition
at night
show examples
and keep watching movies and listening to music at a very loud volume and high bass.
Secondly
, he allows visitors often at our place and
cheer
Correct subject-verb agreement
cheers
show examples
all night long
while
keeping the lights on until they are finished.
Finally
, he uses my belongings without prior permission and missing regularly.
For instance
, during my terms, it makes me struggle more on concentrating my studies and having a good night’s sleep.
As a result
, I cannot do well in exams and
consequently
getting
Wrong verb form
get
show examples
poor grades. In
this
circumstance, I cannot let it go as it is affecting my health and study both ways and
needed
Wrong verb form
I need
show examples
to change my accommodation immediately.
Therefore
, I would be grateful if you could arrange
me
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
a single room from next month. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Mahmudul Hasan
Submitted by tamim.hasan007 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
What to do next:
Look at other essays: