Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Television

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became one of the major entertainment in children's life. In recent

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most of the kids spend a lot of

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in front of the TV's, even though video telecasting cannot

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take the place or move into the position of

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the books as

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educational

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. Because of which majority of parents think that, teenagers are not able to do well in their studies due to spending most of their

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the TV

or video games rather than

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in front

of books.

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television

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could be an important machine in the juvenile stage. Parents

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have a concern regarding their kids wasting valuable

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, which is hampering their studies. Main reason could be kids always get attracted towards cartoons,

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games and other series which we get on regular bases. By the survey conducted by

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university proved that 99% of teenagers like playing videos or watching cartoons

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day by day, because of their attraction towards them and performing less in their studies. These few instances which made parents to bother more on their studies by which parents have stopped opting for dish connections. Despite of

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the few risks

of youth wasting

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, the logic behind is that they get relaxed by spending

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since, they can concentrate more on their studies. After start going to school, studying for long hours, carry

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a heavy load

of books, which always stress the juveniles, with which they face more mental and physical burden. In order to surpass their stress conditions kids like to relax while watching broadcastings. As per the survey, relaxed and less stressful kids perform well in exams than the kids who are

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stressed to spend more

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on studies than encouraging them to be in other activities like watching or playing.

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essay argued that most of the parents are

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kids, since they spoiling their

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in front of

television

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. In my

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with that, as justified by saying, allow children to relax in the way they like with which they can concentrate more on studies, whereas it always gives them better space and peaceful mind in order to

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to gain with effort

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their results.