Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self employed?

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and foremost reason, why people do not want to
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why people choose self-
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for a
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or organization. Being self
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have some drawback. The most important disadvantage, for being a self-
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is lack of
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or resources of what kind of
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they will do. For starting a
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startup. The
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most important drawback, is a
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do not
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they are not aware about what outcomes they might be
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and idea about
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the work
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after a man/woman have
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started
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who have not enough money and
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knowledge they
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knowledge as they work
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for a
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or any organization.

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