Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
New medicines are developed by testing them on animals to cure unknown diseases. Some people consider it immoral to use animals and
expermenting
on animals is needed to be the act of conducting a controlled test or investigation
experimenting
banned whereas
others are optimistic about the prospects of successful experimentations. Accept comma addition
banned, whereas
This
essay will cover both the views and personal viewpoint will be shared while concluding.
Just like humans, it is the right of animals to live a healthy life and their habitat should be preserved. Several animal Linking Words
organization
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organizations
works
on protecting different species of animals. Animals not only suffer when they are used for experimentation, it Suggestion
work
also
adds a threat to the survival of these species as well because we are unaware of the consequences of these experiments. There might be a slight possibility of developing a disorder in animals which could Linking Words
ulitmately
result in the extinction of that race. So, animals should not be used for experimentation purposes.
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On the other hand
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creates an international emergency to prevent the death count of the locals. Suggestion
disease
This
situation urges the medical faculty to develop new ways to fight with these diseases. In Linking Words
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crisis, sacrificing animals for experimentation to create a cure for the dangerous virus is the only possible solution. Spreading of novel Linking Words
coronavirus
is an example of Suggestion
such
calamity. Now a Linking Words
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, Medical scientists and microbiologists are Suggestion
day
expermineting
on animals to find a medicine for curing the act of conducting a controlled test or investigation
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this
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be banned.
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animal race
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the animal race
an animal race
animal races
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of developing new medicine in order to protect humanity if the unknown virus comes up. To a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
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, my personal viewpoint is that scientist should keep on using animals for developing medicines as sacrificing a few animals for mankind protection is better than the extinction of humanity.summarize briefly
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