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You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: • say which advertisement you are answering • describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about • explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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Dear Sir/Madam, I saw the advertisement
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 a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Since I have experience in teaching, so it will be easy
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to manage. I am basically a maths professor
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 Integral University for
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 six years. Since these will be night classes, students will not be able to focus on
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. So, maths is a subject that keeps students energetic and attentive Yours faithfully, Shreya
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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