You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: • say which advertisement you are answering • describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about • explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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Dear Sir/Madam, I saw the advertisement

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a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Since I have experience in teaching, so it will be easy

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to manage. I am basically a maths professor

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Integral University for

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six years. Since these will be night classes, students will not be able to focus on

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. So, maths is a subject that keeps students energetic and attentive Yours faithfully, Shreya

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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