Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Although
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, the highway is a reliable source to cut down a long distance in quick time for the people, it
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also
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also causes
has also caused
is also causing
cause
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several issues to them.
This
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essay will discuss few drawbacks and related solutions
of
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about
it. There are several negative sides of using the freeway. One of the vital
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cause
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causes
is the
possiblity
a future prospect or potential
possibility
of meeting with the
accident
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due to the high speed of vehicles. Generally, motorways are built for reaching quickly to the destination using the top speed of
motor
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motors
which can be dangerous if the vehicle's tire get damaged in the mid of
journey
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the journey
.
Result
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The result
of
this
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could be
end
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the end
an end
of the passenger's life.
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, in a US based survey, it is reported that maximum
accident
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cases have been noted
throught
all the way through
throughout
through
the highways only compared to the city road. Another problem is the
traffic
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chaose
a state of extreme confusion and disorder
chaos
cause
case
cause
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by
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of
the
accident
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on the motorway. Usually, the highway has
only exit route
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an only exit route
are at the each city only because of that it is hard for people to pass by the
traffic
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jam if any
accident
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occured
come to pass
occurred
in
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on
their way.
This
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can
cause
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delay to their office or any
ememergency
a sudden unforeseen crisis (usually involving danger) that requires immediate action
emergency
situation.
At
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On
the other side, there are several solutions to
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this
plural of "this"
these
causes.
Firstly
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, the government should
invested
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invest
in the sign post at several intervals which can inform the driver to move to
left side
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the left side
in
such
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emergency situation and keeping long distance between the vehicles.
This
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will help the driver to handle his own vehicle in
flat tire situation
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a flat tire situation
the flat tire situation
and allow the
next
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driver to slow down his own car.
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, the chance of
accident
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will be reduce
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will be reduced
. Another positive action is to provide quick service to handle the
accident
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event.
In other words
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, if the proper
sevice
work done by one person or group that benefits another
service
device
selves
could be establish
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could be established
which can reach to specific location in a short time,
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
the
traffic
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could be solved easily.
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, the Australia has recently launched a program with which
accident
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chaos can be quickly resolved. In conclusion, whereas there are several prospective issues in running
vehicle
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vehicles
on the motorway
such
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as
accident
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and
traffic
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, these can be taken care by posting the banner and adding quicker service.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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