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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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I agree that the benefits of nuclear technology outweigh the disadvantages, with the use of nuclear technology having huge benefits to our environment and making many improvements to safety. Nuclear power provides clean energy, and is one of the best solutions to one of the biggest problems facing our world today that global warming. Nuclear reactors produce no carbon dioxide, or air pollution.
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 has been some recent and significant improvements made to the way nuclear plants are operated that have a addressed the issue that could prevent a catastrophic event like what happened with Chernobyl. My country has forbidden nuclear power after a popular referendum and we often accommodate Chernobyl citizens in Italy. In
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 way, we share our cultures and habits, by making us more open minded. According to me, Chernobyl’s disaster has to teach us that we should increase green power.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Deterrence
  • Mutually assured destruction
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Cost-effective
  • Radiation therapy
  • Proliferation
  • Rogue states
  • Radioactive waste disposal
  • Catastrophic accidents
  • Climate change
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