The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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I agree that the benefits of nuclear technology outweigh the disadvantages, with the use of nuclear technology having huge benefits to our environment and making many improvements to safety. Nuclear power provides clean energy, and is one of the best solutions to one of the biggest problems facing our world today that global warming. Nuclear reactors produce no carbon dioxide, or air pollution.

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addition to the environmental benefits the safety issues that concern most people are mostly fear without education. When you research

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topic you can see that there have been substantially less incidents and deaths than there were caused by fossil fuel fired plants.

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has been some recent and significant improvements made to the way nuclear plants are operated that have a addressed the issue that could prevent a catastrophic event like what happened with Chernobyl. My country has forbidden nuclear power after a popular referendum and we often accommodate Chernobyl citizens in Italy. In

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way, we share our cultures and habits, by making us more open minded. According to me, Chernobyl’s disaster has to teach us that we should increase green power.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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in some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from healthy problem as a result of eating too much fast food. it is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

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