Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is well-known that
music
can reach
to
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into
the different parts of the world
.
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.
It is yet debatable that
music
is a
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used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
one
of the best way for having
closer relationship
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a closer relationship
of the people in various nations and ages as well. Would
this
be
trure
consistent with fact or reality; not false
true
? I
contend
without stop or interruption
continued
to agree with
this
statement.
This
will be explain
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will be explained
in the following paragraph how
music
helps for the amalgamation of
culture
and people together in all aspects.
Music
is important for different
culture
of
different
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different countries
country
. But it has been found that people listen and enjoy different kinds of
music
.
For example
K-Pop
music
initially
was not so famous but when they became known to other English speaking
country
, now they might be
popular
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more popular
than before. And people could learn the Korean
culture
as well.
Thus
, people become closer by
this
music
.
Further
, it has been seen that older people generally does not like hip-hop
music
. They like soft
music
which can always not available in their own
country
musician.
For instance
, people of South Asian countries used to listen Indian Contemporary
music
.
This
type of
music
is not present in their
country
.
As a result
, it has been proved that
music
can bring people of all ages together. In conclusion,
although
some people opine that
music
is not important for
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the act of overcoming or outdoing
beating
budgeting
people
together but
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together, but
I believe it does
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popularly
for closing people of all
culture
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cultures
and ages. If government gives proper attention in
this
sector
,
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,
it will help every
country
becoming popular.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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